Lost in the sea

Lost in The Sea

intro	begin	problem	solution	conclusion
Max and Joe Manukau In the holidays fishing	Get ready What they   packed	Boat tipped over huge wave Fell in the water Can’t swim sharks	Joe attacked by shark Max survived helicopter	Didn’t go fishing

                             

                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 In the holidays two boys  named Max and Joe. they were excited because they were going fishing in  their new boat.  It had a GPS computer and 7000 times turbo.  It was a fantastic boat.  first they needed to get their food,  fishing rods and bait. They headed to the Manukau Beach in their car. They went  fishing.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

They grabbed their fishing rod and throw it in the water and sang the fishing rod around and he saw a fish fishing rod. and joe tried to catch a fish.and max laugh because joe couldn't catch a fish and joe was waiting and waiting. Suddenly he caught a fish. And they put the fish into the  bucket  and they went fishing again. and Max  caught another fish and joe caught another fish and they had fun.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

Suddenly a huge wave tipped the boat over.  Max and Joe fell into the water. they couldn't swim and Joe got stabbed. and then the shark attacked Joe.                                                              

                                                                                                                                                                         And survive the shark attack. And the  Helicopter came to get Max.  Max was safe and warm. When Max got home                                                      

                                                                                                                                                                                                                             And Max didn’t  go fishing because Max’s friend got eaten by the shark and Max didn’t want that to happen to him.