Lost in The Sea
intro
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begin
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problem
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solution
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conclusion
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Max and Joe
Manukau
In the holidays
fishing
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Get ready
What they
packed
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Boat tipped over
huge wave
Fell in the water
Can’t swim
sharks
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Joe attacked by shark
Max survived
helicopter
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Didn’t go fishing
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In the holidays two boys named Max and Joe. they were excited because they were going fishing in their new boat. It had a GPS computer and 7000 times turbo. It was a fantastic boat. first they needed to get their food, fishing rods and bait. They headed to the Manukau Beach in their car. They went fishing.
They grabbed their fishing rod and throw it in the water and sang the fishing rod around and he saw a fish fishing rod. and joe tried to catch a fish.and max laugh because joe couldn't catch a fish and joe was waiting and waiting. Suddenly he caught a fish. And they put the fish into the bucket and they went fishing again. and Max caught another fish and joe caught another fish and they had fun.
Suddenly a huge wave tipped the boat over. Max and Joe fell into the water. they couldn't swim and Joe got stabbed. and then the shark attacked Joe.
And survive the shark attack. And the Helicopter came to get Max. Max was safe and warm. When Max got home
And Max didn’t go fishing because Max’s friend got eaten by the shark and Max didn’t want that to happen to him.
