Alien
An alien is a friendly magical
creature that can glow in outer space.
Aliens are intelligent creatures that can do amazing and incredible things.
Aliens are teleport creature, they can teleport everywhere and anywhere.
Aliens are scary creatures that can scare you to death.
An alien wears a disguise so people won’t know who they are.
Aliens have big eye’s to see incredible and amazing staff.
Aliens are ugly creatures with ugly faces.
I believe in aliens because aliens fly around in their spaceships
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Hendrix
Term 3 2016
Hendrix it is me Chris.t i like how you gave info about the aliens life and fetchers but their is one thing that is Wong your story keeps repeating aliens are every time you start a new paragraph i think that you should be more creative when you are staring a new paragraph.
ReplyDeleteI really loved the story but next time could you please it a bit longer theres this tv show that i watch and its a group of nerds and there called the farters
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Kia Ora, Hendrix, Max here from Waikowhai Primary School room Waitemata. I really enjoyed reading your story because of all of your information on Aliens. The last line reminded me of the time that I found out what a Flying Saucers/UFO was. Maybe next time could you add some more details about Aliens. I personally don't believe in Aliens because I think they're silly. If you want to check out my blog copy this link - wpsmaxmu.blogspot.co.nz
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Kia ora Hendrix, My name Kieren from Waikowhai Primary school, Room Waitemata. I really liked your information on aliens and why you like these species. Aliens are weird creatures that are a mystery, People think they are mythical beings. They use a vehicle that is called the UFO aka Unidentified flying object Maybe you could do a slide show or maybe do a drawing. You should watch a anime called the Dragon Ball series
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